【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以谚语为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：引出众所周知的谚语，并赞同此观点；

展开话题：从三个方面阐述理由；

话题结论：要意识到早点开始的重要性。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Is Television a Blessing or a Curse

 

"Early bird catches the worm" is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. I fully agree with it and its implication, in my mind, can be justified in three respects.

“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”是个很出名的谚语，我们都很熟悉。我完全赞同这句话，而且我认为，它的含义可以从三个方面进行说明。

 

First, it takes time to accomplish a task —— the earlier you begin，the more likely you will reach your goal earlier. Otherwise you call never be sure of your success. Second, when diligence becomes a habit, nothing will be difficult to a determined and persistent person. For example, you will never feel bored and tired at doing social investigation if you really enjoy it. Third, looking at the matter from another perspective， we will find that social resources are always limited and opportunities are always for those prepared minds.

第一，要完成一项任务需要时间一一你越早开始，就越有可能更早达成你的目标。否则你不可能确保你的成功。第二，当勤奋变成一种习惯，对一个有决心能坚持的人来说，没有事情是困难的。比如说，在做一项社会调查的时候，如果你真正喜欢它，你就从不会感到无聊和疲惫。第三，从另一角度来看这一问题，我们会发现，社会资源总是有限的，机会总是留给那些有准备的人的。

 

Living in an age when most people are intelligent, diligence seems more than necessary. As the modem competition becomes more and more fierce, we should realize the importance of early beginning. (152 words)

生活在一个大部分人都很聪明的年代，勤奋看起来非常有必要。由于现代的竞争变得越来越激烈，所以我们应该意识到早点开始的重要性。

 

【高分句型解析】

First, it takes time to accomplish a task —— the earlier you begin，the more likely you will reach your goal earlier.第一，要完成一项任务需要时间一一你越早开始，就越有可能更早达成你的目标。

 

点评：这句话中运用了一个句型“that+比较级”，表示“越……就越……”。类似的句型，在写作中要学会运用。

 

【作文加分词】

proverb  ['pra:və:rb]      n.谚语，俗语

be familiar with       熟悉

implication  [,impli'keiʃn]      n.含意，暗示

accomplish  [ə'ka:mpliʃ ]      v.完成，达到

diligence  ['dilidʒəns]      n.勤奋

persistent  [pər'sistənt]     adj.坚持的

social investigation      社会调查

perspective  [pər'spektiv]     n.看法，观点

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以节约能源为主题的解释说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：石油价格飙升，很多能源资源面临枯竭；

展开话题：举例说明能源资源枯竭的后果；

话题结论：提出节能建议。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Save the Energy Resources

 

Recently, it is reported that oil price in the interactional market has been skyrocketing drastically. In China, many traditional mineral cities in northeastern China has run into predicament, with their economy collapsed and workers unemployed, only because coal has been mined out.

据报道，最近国际市场的石油价格大幅飘升。在中国，东北部的许多传统煤炭城市经济崩溃、工人失业，城市陷入困境，仅仅是因为煤被开采得枯竭了。

 

Unlike sunlight, water and wind, fossil energy resources, including coal, oil and gas, are not practically reproductive during human history. Once consumed, they're gone forever. If they were to be exhausted before we could find sufficient resources to replace them, we would have to live in entire blackout again, which is of course not what we would like to see.

不像阳光、水和风，化石能源资源，包括煤、石油和天然气，在人类历史上其实都不是可再生的。一旦被消耗了，它们就永远消失了。如果在我们能够找到足够的能代替它们的资源之前，它们就消耗完了，我们会再次陷入全面停电的局面，这当然是我们不愿意看到的。

 

Therefore, we must economize on energy resources. New techniques should be developed and applied to reduce energy consumption in industry and daily life. Alterative energy should be employed wherever possible. Any practice that wastes energy should be eradicated. (140 words)

因此，我们必须节约能源资源。应该研发出新技术，将其应用在工业和日常生活中减少能源消耗上。在任何可能的地方都应该使用可替代能源。任何浪费能源的行为都应该被根除。

 

【高分句型解析】

Recently, it is reported that oil price in the international market has been skyrocketing drastically.据报道，最近国际市场的石油价格大幅飙升。

 

点评：这句话中我们要学会一个句型it is reported that…表示根据报道，此外还需注意一个很在意思的词skyrocketing，我们知道sky是天空，rocket是火箭，火箭升空的速度是非常快的，所以不难猜出这个词的意思是“猛涨，突然高升”。

 

【作文加分词】

skyrocket  ['skara:kit]      v.猛涨，突然高升

drastically  ['dræstikli]      adv.大大地

run into      遭遇，陷入

predicament  [pri'dikəmənt]      n.困境，危境

fossil energy resources      化石能源

reproductive  [,ri:prə'dʌktiv]      adj.再生的

sufficient  [sə'fiʃnt]       adj.足够的，充分的

blackout  ['blækaut]      n.熄灯;停电

economize  [i'ka:nəmaiz]      v.节约，节省

alterative energy      替代能源，新能源、

eradicate  [i'rædikeit]      v.根除，灭绝

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以校园垃圾分类为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：校园垃圾大量存在，学生的垃圾分类意识薄弱；

展开话题：详述垃圾分类对于环境保护和垃圾处理的益处；

话题结论：加强垃圾分类的教育，提高大学生的垃圾分类意识，同时自觉地转化为实际行动。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Waste Separation from Your Campus

 

It's no doubt that university campuses will produce a large amount of rubbish every day, however, there are fewer college students paying attention to its classification.

毫无疑问，大学校园里每天都会制造大量垃圾，但是，注意垃圾分类的大学生很少。

 

Factually waste separation is vital to create an environment-friendly campus. Firstly, waste separation does great contribution to the environmental protection. Since some of waste is recyclable, while other is unrecyclable, if all the students could voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from unrecyclable rubbish, the risk of the environmental pollution will be greatly reduced. Secondly, waste separation could save a lot of energy and trine on its processing.

其实垃圾分类对创造环保型的校园来说至关重要。首先，垃圾分类对保护环境贡献很大。由于一些垃圾是可循环利用的，而另外一些是不可循环利用的，如果所有学生都能自主地把可循环利用的垃圾和不可循环利用的垃圾区别开来，对环境造成污染的风险会大大降低。其次，垃圾分类能使人们在处理垃圾过程中节省大量的时间和精力。

 

With the rapid increase in the amount of rubbish at the campus, rubbish classification does not permit of any delay. On the one hand, as the well-educated people, college students should act as hosts of the universities and separate waste from this moment in their daily life. On the other hand, university authorities should strengthen students' awareness of environmental protection and guide students to separate waste in a reasonable way.(166 words)

随着校园垃圾数量的快速增加，垃圾分类刻不容缓。一方面，作为受过良好教育的人，大学生应该以大学主人自居，从现在起，在日常生活中就把垃圾进行分类。另一方面，大学校方应该加强学生的环保意识，引导学生用正确的方式对垃圾进行分类。

 

【高分句型解析】

Since some of waste is recyclable, while other is unrecyclable, if all the students could voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from unrecyclable rubbish, the risk of the environmental pollution will be greatly reduced.由于一些垃圾是可循环利用的，而另外-些是不可循环利用的，如果所有学生都能自主地把可循环利用的垃圾和不可循环利用的垃圾区别开来，对环境造成污染的风险会大大降低.

 

点评：这句话读起来好像是绕口令一样，主要是因为运用了recyclable和unrecyclable这样一组反义词，特别要注意这两个词的构词特点。

 

【作文加分词】

classification  [,klæsifi'keiʃn]     n.分类

contribution  [,ka:ntri'bju:ʃn]      n.报助，贡献

recyclable  [,ri:'saikləbl]     adj.可循环利用的

voluntarily  [,va:lən'terəli]     adv.自动地，自发地

differentiate  [,difə'renʃieit]      v.区别，区分

well-educated  [wel'edʒukeitid]     adj.受过良好教育的

awareness  [ə'wernəs]     n.意识

 

备战2015四级作文篇(34)

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以限制使用一次性塑料袋为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述人们经常使用一次性塑料袋的现象；

展开话题：说明一次性塑料袋的严重危害；

话题结论：表明态度，限制使用一次性塑料袋有好处。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

 

In the past, a great many people used to use disposable plastic bags for shopping and other purposes. However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags has led to great damages both to environment and to people's health.

过去，许多人在购物或其他时候常常使用一次性塑料袋。然而，过度使用一次性塑料袋已对环境和人们的健康造成了巨大的危害。

 

On the one hand, it takes about 200 years for a buried plastic bag to decompose and be absorbed by the soil. On the other hand, the use of disposable plastic bags will

indirectly do harm to people's health, which is less known to the public. Sometimes people buy hot food packed into disposable plastic bags to save the time and labor in washing their dining utensils. Yet they are not informed of the chemicals in the bags will release in high temperature. Therefore, they are eating the poisonous stuff while enjoying the tasty food.

一方面，只埋在地里的塑料袋需要两百年时间才能降解，被土壤吸收。另一方面，一次性塑料袋会间接对人体健康造成损害，大家对这一点知之甚少。有时人们为了省时省事，不用清洗餐具，就将买来的热腾腾的食物装进一次性塑料袋里。而他们并不知道袋中的化学物品在高温下会释放出来。因此，在享受美食时，他们吃的其实是有毒物品。

 

It's enlightening and significant that our government has banned the free provision of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets. Trial practice has shown considerable reduction in the consumption of bags. In a word, fewer plastic bags will bring us the sustainable development of our earth.(177 words)

我国政府己禁止超市免费提供一次性塑料袋。试行的政策已表明塑料袋的消费有了大幅度的减少。总之，少用塑料袋可让我们的地球保持可持续发展。

 

【高分句型解析】

…it takes about 200 years for a buried plastic bag to decompose and be absorbed by the soil.……只埋在地里的塑料袋需要两百年时间才能降解，被土壤吸收.

 

点评：这句话中用了一个句型"it takes some time for sth. to do sth."，表示“对某事来说要花多长时间才能完成”。

 

【作文加分词】

disposable  [di'spouzəbl]    adj.可任意使用的

poisonous  ['pɔizənəs]    adj.有毒的

excessive  [ik'sesiv]    adj.过度的

enlightening  [in'laitnniŋ]    adj.有启迪作用的

decompose  [,di:kəm'pouz]    v.分解

provision  [prə'viʒn]    n.供应

do harm to...    对……有害

sustainable development    可持续发展

dining utensils    餐具

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以噪音污染为主题的解释说明论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述噪音污染已成为一个严重的社会问题；

展开话题：从三方面阐述解决噪音污染的办法；

话题结论：只有同心协力，才能解决噪音污染问题。

 

【作文背诵范文】

How to Eliminate Noise Pollution

 

Nowadays, along with the fast pace of urban development, noise pollution has largely disturbed the normal life of city dwellers. It has becomes such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society.

现如今，伴随着城市快速发展的步伐，噪音污染对城市居民的正常生活干扰很大。噪音污染成了一个如此严重的问题，所以引起了整个社会的关注。

 

To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind, calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, major factories, as main noise creators, should be moved to industrial zones in suburbs. Department stores and big restaurants should not to be established too close to residential quarters. Moreover, the municipal government should increase the ratio of green land in the city, which can reduce all kinds of noises significantly. Last but not least, all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so as not to disturb the neighboring dwellers.

依我看来，要解决这一严重的问题，需要各方的努力。第一，大型工厂作为主要噪音制造者，应该搬到郊外的工业区。百货商店和大型餐厅不应该建得离居民区太近。另外，市政府应该提高城市土地的绿化率，这能很大程度上减少各种噪音。最后但同样重要的是，在夜间，所有的城市建设都应该停止，以防打扰周围的居民。

 

How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from noise pollution? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating noise pollution at all levels can we expect to have a better environment and a more beautiful future.(176 words)

如果人们不远离噪音污染，如何期望能在一个意义的人生？只有当我们所有人都加入到消除各种噪音污染的努力中，我们才能期望有一个更好的环境，和更美好的未来。

 

【高分句型解析】

…all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so as not to disturb the neighboring dwellers. ……在夜间，所有的城市建设都应该停止，以防打扰周围的居民。

 

点评：这是一个结果状语从句，由so as to这一表结果的不定式短语引导，这一句型有时可以和so that和so…that引导的结果状语从句转换。例如在本句可以这样转换：all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so that they cannot disturb the neighboring dwellers。

 

【作文加分词】

the fast pace of urban development      城市快速发展的步伐

residential   [,rezi'denʃl]      adj.居住的，住宅的

municipal   [mju:niipl]      adj.市政的

dweller   ['dwelər]     n.居民

increase the ratio of      增加……的比率

put an end      结束